Animatic II

Reid Blakley Animatic 2 from Reid Blakley on Vimeo.

After presenting the old animatic to the jury in late April, I decided that I was unsatisfied with Him and Her texting back and forth; I came to feel that it added little to the story and I wasn't pleased with the actual texts that I had come up with for them to write. But after presenting this new version to the class, the consensus was that the texting back and forth added a better arc and narrative to the film. So, this aspect will be back in the next animatic in some form. I'm just not sure exactly how yet.